It was like a poor attempt at a really trippy movie. Too many things were giving it away that you were trying. The bugs out of the t-rex mouth was one. the part where he is flipping through the characters, spins them around, then the whole screen flips around, that was way too much of "Hey look, Im being trippy!" there were some parts that were ok. The part where he sniffs the ashes was gross and creepy, like you probably were shooting for. There could have been more with the ashes, that would have been cool. It just triggered some thoughts in my head. adding a star for that.
I think when you get more practice in animation it will be a lot better.
well, sorry I don't have any tips on improvement.
have a good day
The audio is WAY off.
by the 3rd act, it was over a second off.
the story looks pretty funny, though.
my bad, its been fixed
I would like to see more of a story developement in the first episode.
This one was barely an intro.
It looks like it might be an interesting story, but too short of a segment.
Yeah, I wish that it could have been longer, but... Well, like I said in another reply, I was just getting the feel of CS5.
I was planning on introducing Claros' first companion, (coughcoughtrumpetscough*), here, but I got paranoid about loading times and file size. So, I figured that it would be "better," (not), to make it short. But I apologize, since you were expecting more. I'll make sure to put more time into actually making it a STORY. *thumbs up*
Thanks for the ratings, though!
When the animation ends and it goes back to the little play button screen, it starts the music again, and its still. so the song overlaps.
The animation was cool, Im looking forward to the full version.
I liked it.
The music added a bit of a creep tone, along with the sketchy drawings.
the visuals were pretty good, too.
hard to follow what happens in the end, but its cool.
it was my worst worry O_o, that the ending was not clear enough, but I didn't wanted it to be very obvious, also I didn't have the skill to draw the final final battle between tentacle guy and cowboy guy... hehe
at the end the little leaf the cowboy had in his mouth is in the floor :b (maybe it didn't look like the leaf, thingy, hehehe)
It looks like it is going to be a really good animation when you finish it!
do you need voices?
Well, I'm not gonna make the pokemons talk, but I'm thinking about doing like in the anime and make voice actors play the pokemons... If I can find any voice actors that wants to that is.
Seems more like madness thanksgiving.
This flash was hilarious! He did everything I want to do when I go to Wal*Mart.
When thinking up ideas for my Wal-Mart flashes, I just go and hang around my Wal-Mart for an hour. Viola!
Really noble of sambakza!
Seems like a lot of other people would just leave it up anyway.
I had to write a review when I realized what the hotfish were!
They are so good! like pancakes with filling! I had them in Japan. SO FREAKING
anyway, Why I liked this flash:
Consept art- and not just pictures of it, but consept animation, also. cool
it wasnt just a slideshow.
I love all the songs in this series. They set the mood so well, and this one did perfect.
This episode is so depressing, though! But beautiful and artistic.
The scene when he's getting poked in the head by the old guy, the crowd's
reaction when he grabbed the cane was really good.
I loved seeing the change in the punk bunnies from against them, to supporting
them, to being mad at him for quitting.
When he quit, I loved how his scarf turns grey. even though its used alot, its still
a very good representation.
Another great one!
Good job on the detail in the scenery shots. That was cool.
Again, the story was deep and Im sure we can all find something to relate to in it.
I love the chase scene in this one, when she's trying to catch him. It's hilarious when she uses a pokeball!!
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